It’s New Year’s Eve at ten o’clock in the morning. It’s sunny outside and 32 degrees. I brought in the hummingbird feeder last night and put it back out this morning. Yesterday I failed to do so and it was frozen solid by morning. Today I’m being a better bird person. (Please do not call me a hypocrite for feeding the hummers and hating the heron. The heron ATE MY FISH!! Including my very own Big Guy, may he rest in peace. To my way of thinking, hummers are cute and herons are evil!)
From my interactions with readers, many non-writers out there seem to be under the impression that writing gets easier as you go along. This is NOT true.
The book I’m currently working on has been a struggle. For one thing, I discovered that dealing with the chronic pain of a three month long ordeal with bursitis is not good for locating and tuning in to your muse. So that kept things from going smoothly.
The book is supposed to be a combo mystery, a joint investigation that features two of my sets of stock characters, ones from Brandon Walker’s world as well as ones from J.P. Beaumont’s. It was also supposed to be called Stand Down. The problem was, for months, I could barely get those two guys to speak to each other to say nothing of speaking to ME! Finally the other night, during the kind of restless, wrestling-with-the-devil type agony that usually comes at the END of a book, I realized what was wrong. Which brings me to a story—an illustration of the difficulty, if you will.
Years ago, Bill’s and my first Rick Steves Europe Through the Back Door trip was a twenty-one day excursion in France. While there we visited Hotel Dieu, an ancient medieval hospital in Beaune. Walking into the main room, I saw that the far wall was covered by a huge tapestry that included a battlefield horse. It wasn’t until I was right next to the tapestry that I realized one of those magnificent horses had lost a leg. It hadn’t fallen over yet, but it was doomed all the same.
And that was what I realized was wrong with the book I was writing—it was a three-legged horse, limping along on a fractured set of points of view. So this week, I’ve removed one troublesome storyline and put it into a novella. It’s the part of the story that gave the book it’s title, so the novella is now called Stand Down. It’s a major piece of Beau’s and Mel’s story. Yes, Beau will still be working with Brandon Walker on the original case, but with all the action that was such a distraction from the main storyline out of there!
That new book doesn’t have a name yet, but it will have. I’m excited to go to work on it. I have all the pieces, and now I’m sure I can bring them together.
Happy New Year, folks. I will NOT be taking New Year’s Day off!
I visited the Hotel Dieu this past summer, I recall the tapestry, but I missed the 3 legged horse….I hope you writing goes well. I enjoy your books, and look forward to the next one!
Any chance your bursitis is actually an offshoot of that fall you took a few months back, I think you were on vacation?
Wishing you a Happy and productive New Year. Somethimes it seems that when a project doesn’t go together as smoothly as you think it should it requires a change of perspective. In your case your one story becoming two separate stories sounds like a good solution. You can still connect them at a later date, but, each character needs your special care and expertise to tell their story.
Love your books and enjoy your blogs immensely. And the novella will be out when?
Love your explanation of your writing dilemma. Wish we could all do that in real life, just take a portion that bothers us and set it aside. Can’t wait to read the novella and the book.
Love the explanation of your dilemma. Wish we could all do that in real life, just take a bothersome portion and set it aside for future use. Can’t wait to read both the novella and the book.
Thank you for sharing your struggles in your writing process. No matter how much we write, it seems we are always moving into new territory and directions. Happy New Year, and always love reading your books.
A new novel and novella featuring Beau!! Can’t wait!
Wishing you a beautiful New Year as I look forward to reading your delightful novels that take me to Arizona, Seattle and many other interesting places.. Thanks for being you creative, intelligent as I thank you for not listening to that teacher who said you could never be a writer and for the love you have for writing..